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Declaration of Independence copy contains key error, scholar says

Correcting the punctuation, if it is wrong, is unlikely to quell the never-ending debate about the deeper meaning of the Declaration of Independence. But scholars who have reviewed Danielle Allen’s research say she has raised a serious question.


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2 key U.S. documents to visit London

The Bill of Rights and the Declaration of Independence are going on display in Britain for the first time next year. A British Library official said the documents will be featured as part of an exhibition marking the 800th anniversary of the founding document of Britain’s political system, the Magna Carta.

The New York library is lending its copy of the Declaration of Independence, which Thomas Jefferson copied in his own handwriting.

The Bill of Rights, one of the 14 original copies of the document produced in 1789, is lent by the U.S. National Archives.

Both documents could trace their influence to the Magna Carta. Issued in 1215 by King John, it established for the first time that the king was subject to the law, not above it.

The exhibition, “Magna Carta: Law, Liberty, Legacy,” is set to run from March 13 to Sep. 1, 2015.

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Every Fourth of July, some Americans sit down to read the Declaration of Independence, reacquainting themselves with the nation’s founding charter exactly as it was signed by the Second Continental Congress in 1776.

Or almost exactly? A scholar is saying that the official transcript of the document produced by the National Archives contains a significant error — smack in the middle of the sentence beginning “We hold these truths to be self-evident,” no less.

The error, according to Danielle Allen, a professor at the Institute for Advanced Study in Princeton, N.J., concerns a period that appears right after the phrase “life, liberty and the pursuit of happiness” in the transcript, but almost certainly not, she maintains, on the much-faded parchment original.

That errant spot of ink, she believes, makes a difference, contributing to what she calls a “routine but serious misunderstanding” of the document.

The period creates the impression that the list of self-evident truths ends with the right to “life, liberty and the pursuit of happiness,” she says. But as intended by Thomas Jefferson, she argues, what comes next is just as important: the essential role of governments — “instituted among men, deriving their just powers from the consent of the governed” — in securing those rights.

“The logic of the sentence moves from the value of individual rights to the importance of government as a tool for protecting those rights,” Allen said. “You lose that connection when the period gets added.”

Correcting the punctuation, if it is wrong, is unlikely to quell the never-ending debate about the deeper meaning of the Declaration of Independence. But scholars who have reviewed Allen’s research say she has raised a serious question.

“Are the parts about the importance of government part of one cumulative argument, or — as Americans have tended to read the document — subordinate to ‘life, liberty and the pursuit of happiness’?” said Jack Rakove, a historian at Stanford University and a member of the National Archives’ Founding Fathers Advisory Committee. “You could make the argument without the punctuation, but clarifying it would help.”

“Battle” begins

Allen first wondered about the period two years ago, while researching her book “Our Declaration: A Reading of the Declaration of Independence in Defense of Equality,” published last week by Liveright. The period does not appear on the other known versions produced with congressional oversight in 1776, or in most major 20th-century scholarly books on the document. So what was it doing in the National Archives’ transcription?

Allen wrote to the archives in 2012 raising the question, and received a response saying its researchers would look into the matter, followed by silence.

In the past several months, she has quietly enlisted a number of scholars and manuscript experts in what historian Joseph Ellis, who supports her efforts to open the question, wryly called “the battle of the period.”

And now the archives, after a meeting last month with Allen, says it is weighing changes to its online presentation of the Declaration of Independence.

“We want to take advantage of this possible new discovery,” William Mayer, the archives’ executive for research services, said in an email.

A discussion of ways to safely re-examine the deteriorated parchment, he added, is now “a top priority.”

That parchment, created in late July 1776 and credited to the hand of Timothy Matlack, is visible to anyone. Last year, more than a million people lined up to see the document at the National Archives Museum in Washington, where it is kept in a bulletproof glass case filled with stabilizing argon gas that is lowered each evening into an underground vault.

But that document has faded almost to the point of illegibility, leaving scholars to look to other versions from 1776 to determine the “original” text.

And there, Allen argues, while those versions show subtle variations in punctuation and capitalization, the founders’ the intent is clear: no period after “pursuit of happiness.”

The period does not appear in Jefferson’s so-called original rough draft (held in the Library of Congress), or in the broadside that Congress ordered from the Philadelphia printer John Dunlap on July 4. It also does not appear in the version that was copied into Congress’ official records, known as its “corrected journal,” in mid-July.

“An honest mistake”

According to historical records, the Matlack parchment was signed Aug. 2 after being compared with official texts, making it unlikely, Allen argues, that it would have contained a period after “pursuit of happiness.”

Defenders of the period are not without ammunition. The mark does appear in some official and unofficial early printings, including the broadside that Congress commissioned from the Baltimore printer Mary Katherine Goddard in January 1777, for distribution to the states.

Most fatefully, it also clearly appears on the 1823 copperplate created by the engraver William Stone to replicate the original parchment, which was already fading into illegibility. The copperplate, which Stone took three years to create, has long been presumed to be a precise copy and has become the basis for most modern reproductions, including the one that has appeared every July 4 since 1922 in The New York Times.

Allen, who has analyzed variations in more than 70 versions of the Declaration of Independence created between 1776 and 1823, argues that the parchment was already “significantly illegible” by the time Stone began his work. When faced with an unreadable passage, she argues, he probably consulted other versions of the document, including some with the errant period. In short, she writes in a draft paper of her research posted on her website, Stone made “an honest mistake.”

Jack Greene, a historian of the American Revolution at Brown University, called Allen’s paper “a remarkably convincing piece of detective work.” But ultimately, the debate over the accuracy of the period comes down to the faded ink on Matlack’s parchment.

And there, some manuscript experts say, existing high-resolution images provided by the archives show little evidence of a period. In a memo to the National Archives, James McClure, general editor of the Papers of Thomas Jefferson, said the faint mark after “pursuit of happiness” resembles other marks on the parchment that are accepted as commas, rather than the obvious periods at the end of other sentences.

Heather Wolfe, curator of manuscripts at the Folger Shakespeare Library, agrees. With the other periods, “You can tell, the quill was held down and more ink came out,” she said. “That’s not happening after the word ‘happiness.’”

There may yet be clearer pictures to ponder. Mayer of the archives said it was testing the feasibility of doing different types of imaging through the document’s protective glass encasement. “We don’t yet know what’s possible,” he said.

Such imaging may prove inconclusive — or prove Allen wrong. But so be it, she said. “We are having a national conversation about the value of government, and it does get connected to our founding documents,” she said. “We should get right what’s in them.”



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